She went inside and was startled to find a man standing there. “Who are you?” she demanded.
“Ben,” he replied. “I’m a logger.”
“Why are you here?”
“I came to see you, Alma.”
“How do you know my name and that I’d be here?”
“I’ve been watching you.”
She recoiled. “Are you a stalker?”
“No. For years I’ve wanted to tell you who I am.”
“And who are you?”
“I’m your father.”
“You’re crazy. John Miller’s my father.”
“I’m your real father, Alma.
“You’re lying!”
“I’ll prove I’m not lying.” He showed her his birthmark which was identical to hers.
100 Words
This is the continuation of Not For the Fainthearted.
This post is for the Friday’s Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. You can find this week’s prompt here. To read other stories or to participate, click here.
i think she needs more proof than that. perhaps a dna test?
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I agree.
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Well, that sure cut something in her, and perhaps – just perhaps – offered a place for a new shoot to grow. …
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What a way to find out!
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Exactly! Poor girl.
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I wonder why he waited so long. But if he’s really her father, good or bad, she’ll find comfort knowing her roots.
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Perhaps, he wasn’t sure how she would take the news. You’re right. She will find comfort knowing her roots.
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Dear Adele,
I’d say there’s much catching up to do here as well as questions to be answered. Although I’m with Plaridel. DNA testing would be more conclusive. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
There will be a lot of questions. And if it turns out that he is her father, Mom will have some explaining to do. Thanks 🙂
Shalom,
Adele
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I’m not so sure he’s genuine!
Here’s mine!
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A DNA test can easily settle if he’s genuine or not 🙂
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Pops has no right to be in the house. I hope this isn’t one of those Luke Skywalker, Darth Vader situations. Where has Pops been all of these years?
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He went to the hut to see her because he knew that was where he would find her alone. Rest assured, he’s nothing like Darth Vader. I guess he will explain to her where he has been all this time.
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Wow, what a shock for Alma. Hopefully, in the end, a good one. Nicely done!
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Yes, it was a great shock for her. The ending will not be a bad one. Thanks, Brenda 🙂
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Unexpected indeed! Nice one.
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Thanks, Magarisa 🙂
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