“Is Éliott here yet?” Daphnée asked, running to the window.
Her mother laughed. “No, you silly girl. Finish getting dressed.”
“Yes, Mother.”
Mrs. Pelletier quickly left the room. She went to the kitchen to check on the dinner.
The doorbell rang and her son, Louis answered the door. Minutes later, he popped into the kitchen to announce, “Éliott’s here.”
Mrs. Pelletier hurried to the living-room. She froze when she saw Éliott. “Matis, what are you doing here?”
He looked startled. “Clémence?”
“You shouldn’t be here–“
“Mother, why didn’t you tell me that Éliott’s here?” Daphnée demanded.
“You’re Éliott?” Clémence gasped.
100 Words
This post is for the Friday’s Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. You can find this week’s prompt here. To read other stories or to participate, click here.
Oh, the wretched man!!
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Elliot sure gets around, doesn’t he? This might put an end to his little game.
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Yes, he does.
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My goodness. What is going on? Has Matis come to torment Clemence by dating her daughter. There is trouble about to explode, I think.
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You’re right, James. Trouble is about to explode.
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Surprise! Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks, Bill 🙂
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I hate it when that happens!
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Me too.
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Uh oh…. the cat is out of the bag now…
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Yes, it is.
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Dear Adele,
Why is it I suddenly hear, “here’s to you, Mrs. Robinson…?” I see a family conflict on the horizon.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
You got! I thought of Mrs. Robinson too. Family trouble is definitely on the horizon.
Shalom,
Adele
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Will the real Elliot please stand up! Awwkwrd! Great story!
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Yes, it’s a rather awkward situation. Thanks 🙂 Am happy you like the story.
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