He stood at the window, gazing out at the snow covered roses and thought of Maddie.
In his pocket was her telephone number which he had gotten from Sergeant McCoy when he stopped at the gas station where the young man worked.
Should he call her? His heartbeat accelerated at the thought. Would she be happy to hear from him or would she remind him of why he shouldn’t have called? Would it be wrong for him to call and let her know that he had heard about her young man’s death or that he had received the Christmas card?
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This is part six of the story about General Turpentine and Maddie, the African-American nurse he met during World War II.
This post is for the Friday’s Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. You can find this week’s prompt here. To read other stories or to participate, click here.
Thanks for another entry in the saga. I hope you put them all in collection one day. This is starting to feel like one of those serials where its like will they, won’t they? Can’t take it!! 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂 Thanks for the great suggestion. I will definitely to do that. Yes, it does feel like a serial, doesn’t it? They want to be together but, he has a family and there’s the issue with interracial relationships in those times as well.
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I guess the only way to find out is to make that call.
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I guess he’s hesitant and conflicted because of his family. Stay tuned to see if he makes the call or not 🙂
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An evocative story.
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Thanks, Penny.
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Enjoying this story, Adele!
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Thanks, Dora 🙂 I’m happy to hear that.
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I liked how you built the conflict inside his mind. Clearly, he sees this as a relationship deeper than just as friends otherwise he would call and she would understand. I am just guessing here – who knows?
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Thanks, James. And he’s conflicted because he has a family and he’s in love with her but she’s colored. In those times interracial romances were taboo.
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Dear Adele,
I’d say it’s heart vs head here. I wish him well.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Yes, I have a feeling, though, that the heart will win the battle.
Shalom,
Adele
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Having not read all the parts, I can say this stands alone… but now I wan to know more!
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Thanks, Dale. If you’re interested in reading the saga, here are the links for the prequels:
https://notestowomen.wordpress.com/2020/10/29/maddie-and-the-general/
https://notestowomen.wordpress.com/2020/11/11/home-with-the-family/
https://notestowomen.wordpress.com/2020/12/17/the-christmas-card/
https://notestowomen.wordpress.com/2020/12/23/so-many-gone/
https://notestowomen.wordpress.com/2021/01/09/janes-fear/
They are in the right sequence. Some of them you have probably read already.
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Oh cool. Thanks, Adele.
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You’re welcome, Dale 🙂
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To call or not to call, the age-old dilemma…
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Tricky dilemma, but the only ay forward is to make the call. I think he should think carefully about what he’s going to say though. A mistake now could ruin everything.
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Yes, it is a tricky dilemma. He can make the call but the problem is that it won’t be enough for him. He will want to see her in person and that shouldn’t happen because of Jane and their kids.
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