I ran through the forest. The night was at my heels like a pack of dogs at ma skirts. It goin’ be dark soon. I’m supposin’ to meet Joe, a free negro who’s goin’ to help me escape to the North.
Afraid of gettin’ lost, I run faster and stumble. I fall and cry out as a shootin’ pain travel up ma leg. Ma ankle was throbbin’.
Tears stung ma eyes. How was I goin’ get through them woods on a busted ankle? Suddenly, a bright white light shone in ma face, almost blindin’ me. Then, an Injun man appeared.
100 Words
I read an article about black Seminoles who are descendants of runaway slaves who escaped from coastal South Carolina and Georgia into the Florida wilderness beginning as early as the late 1600s. The runaway slaves joined with various Indian groups escaping into Florida at the same period. The MC of my story is a young runaway slave woman who encounters a Seminole Indian.
This was written for the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields For more details, visit Here. To read other stories based on this week’s prompt, visit Here.
Source: Wikipedia
I liked the night like a pack of dogs at her heels
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Thanks, Neil. It just came to me and I ran with it 🙂
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Dear Adele,
Now I’m wondering if the big Injun man might be her salvation. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I have a feeling that he might be. Thanks!
Shalom,
Adele
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Let’s hope that it is freedom that awaits for her.
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I have a feeling that it is 🙂
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What a story – it left me breathless!
Susan A Eames at
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Ha ha Good one, Susan.
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edgy stuff, really well done, loved it
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Thank you. Am thrilled that you loved it 🙂
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A thrilling tale of survival, and thank you for the education in your afterword.
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Thank you 🙂 and you’re welcome.
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I hope the Seminole Injun helped her to freedom! 🙂
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He will 🙂
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An encouraging ending.
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Those are the kind of endings I like 🙂
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An exciting story about a dark history. I love that there is hope in the end.
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Thank you 🙂 I wanted to give her hope.
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How terrifying for this young slave, knowing that if she is caught she could be killed, or whipped, or sold to someone else who would mistreat her. And what a relief when the Seminole appears! I’m just going to assume that he rescued her and they lived happily ever after 🙂
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Yes, it was terrible for runaway slaves if they were caught. You have assumed correctly, Linda. He rescued her and they will live happily ever after 🙂
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The Injun man will help her – they’re a downtrodden race too.
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Yes, he will help her. They have a lot in common.
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I’m thinkin’ the Injuns and the slaves had a whole lot in common so she is about to be rescued.
Liked this!
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They did and that’s why it’s a good thing that she was found by a Seminole man.
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You built the tension well. I enjoyed the voice of the runaway slave and the hopeful ending.
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Thanks, Brenda 🙂 I always enjoy a happy or hopeful ending.
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Ooh I enjoyed this story with the historical background. Thank you for sharing that piece of history.
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I’m happy you enjoyed the story, Fatima 🙂 And you’re welcome. I love this type of history.
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Hope the Injun man will help her move to North.
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Yes, he will definitely help her.
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A gripping story and an interesting historical note. Well told.
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Thanks, Margaret 🙂
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Brilliantly rendered piece of history. great write!
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Thanks, Violet 🙂
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