The flickering candlelight illuminates my furrowed brow
as I think of the expression on your face when I told you that I loved you.
You were silent.
I waited for you to say you loved me too, but you didn’t.
40 Words
This is the first time, I’m participating in the Weekend Writing Prompt by Sammi Cox. For instructions, click HERE.
Excellent first time out. Thanks for joining in,
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Thank you, Violet 🙂 And I was delighted to be a part of this. I love these challenges.
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Awww, so sad.
Ronda
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We both kinda-sorta went in the same direction-ish 😉
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Yes, we both went in the unrequited love direction 🙂
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Indeed!
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🙂
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Dear Adele,
One sided love is so sad and frustrating. You’ve captured the feeling in 40 words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Yes, unrequited love is a sad and frustrating thing. Thank you 🙂 And if it weren’t for you, I wouldn’t have known about this wonderful writing prompt challenge. Am looking forward to participating in the next one.
Shalom,
Adele
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Namaste 🙂
I for one hope you will continue to participate in the challenge. I loved the expectation, the tension and melancholy of this piece.
Catch up next week!
Namaste 🙂
DN
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Thank you so much, Dewin 🙂 I loved this challenge and was delighted to participate. Will definitely continue participating.
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Namaste 🙂
My pleasure 🙂 Thank you for bringing sensitivity to the diverse mix of talent already enjoyed by those participating in the challenge.
I look forward to more of your gentle touch next weekend. Until then, I hope the week stirs you in mysterious ways sufficiently to flutter your inky feather 🙂
Live in Love, Go in Peace. Namaste 🙂
DN
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Thank you, Dewin. You have a remarkable week too 🙂
AB
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Thank you AB.
Namaste 🙂
DN
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You’re welcome 🙂
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And you did a great job
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Thank you. How is/was Las Vegas?
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I had a blast. Loved every minute. Thanks for asking
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Am happy to hear that. And you’re welcome 🙂
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Beautifully written and so full of emotion 🙂
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Thanks, Sammi 🙂
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