It was a lovely summer day in the park. The heady fragrance of the flowers drifted in the air and she inhaled deeply but nothing seemed to quell the uneasiness she felt. Ashanti was about to end a relationship with a man she never should have gotten involved with but the attraction was so strong and she owed him so much…
A couple strolled by, the man sheltering under an umbrella. Her cell rang. It was him, telling her where to meet him.
Ten minutes later, she was sitting at the back of his car. “I can’t continue seeing you.”
“Why not?”
“You’re married with children.”
“You knew that when we got involved. What’s changed?”
“I’ve changed.”
“If it weren’t for me, your brother would be in jail.”
“I know and I’m grateful—“
“I don’t want your gratitude. I want you.”
“Commissioner—”
“One phone call from me and your brother gets arrested.”
“Please, don’t.”
“Your place tonight?”
“Yes.”
“Good. I love you, Ashanti.”
She didn’t answer but after they kissed, she left.
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This was written in response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. For more information visit Here. To read other stories based on this week’s prompt, visit Here.
Is that not passive rape?
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It’s manipulation. His idea of love is warped.
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My god, this is horrible! Not the writing, obviously – that’s incredibly powerful.
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Yes, it’s horrible and I knew you meant Ashanti’s situation. Thank you. It’s sad when one person uses their position and influence to manipulate another.
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It really is. Wonderfully written!
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Thanks, Emily 🙂
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You really need to be careful who you get involved with. Your story proves that. Wonderful story!
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Yes, this is an unfortunate reality for both men and women. Thank you 🙂
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Yes, so true!
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Yes indeed. Especially those who seem to be helping one. Some of them want us to feel beholden to them.
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Yes, true!
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Brutal.
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Yes, it is.
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I do hope the law catches up with the commissioner soon. And that her brother knows what she is doing for him.
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I hope so too that he gets what’s coming to him very soon and that her brother learns of the great sacrifice she’s making for him.
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Oh my God.. What a vile man… Great take on the prompt.
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Thanks, Meha. And yes, he’s a vile man.
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