She stood on top of the mountain, her eyes riveted to the American flag as it flapped gently in the breeze. It was more spectacular than the surrounding landscape. It was a symbol of freedom from a life of religious persecution in a country where being a Christian led to her husband’s arrest and imprisonment. After learning of his death resulting from vicious beatings and torture, she fled their home. She was two months pregnant.
For days she traveled on foot with nowhere to sleep and nothing to eat except sunflower seeds but still, she continued to cling to her faith. She found a safe house in Bangkok but shortly after, Thai police showed up, seized her possessions and sent her to detention. The judge ordered her deportation. Back in the jail cell, she prayed, “God, please help me.”
And He did, through the U.S. Embassy officials who helped her to escape from the Chinese and to America. Now she and their daughter were free. One day she would tell her about her brave father.
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It was inspired by a true event and was written for the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge. For more information, please visit Here.
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Source: Christian Post; The Voice of the Martyrs Canada; CBN News
Well said.
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Thank you, James.
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Awesome take.
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Thanks!
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America can still be a force for good for those around the world, a nice message of hope.
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Thanks, Iain. Yes, America is still a symbol of hope and freedom for many. I loved it when I used to live there.
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Amazing story! So heartbreaking that it is inspired by a true story. Sad that anyone had to go through this.
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Thanks. Yes, it is heartbreaking what people have to go through. There are many other true stories like this one. In the story which inspired me to write this post, the woman’s husband didn’t die in prison but there are some Christians who end up losing their lives.
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Oh yes, I know there are. I’m glad her husband didn’t die in prison.
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I’m sorry I had to make my character a widow, though, but I had to hit home that there are many who die for their faith, leaving families behind.
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I understand.
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